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The Same Career. A Very Different Resume.

This is a real VSG rewrite for a real executive — shared with permission, with identifying details removed. Same experience, same facts. What changed is how the story is told.

Before & After

Look at how the rewrite leads with measurable wins, matches the language of the target role, and turns responsibilities into results — using only real, verifiable experience.

Before
P.R.
Southern California · phone · email

Professional Summary

Business Development & Talent Acquisition leader with 25 years of experience building high-performing recruiting teams, scaling multi-market operations, and driving revenue growth through strategic client partnerships. Proven track record of building divisions from the ground up, winning and expanding key accounts, and partnering with C-suite executives on workforce planning, organizational design, and go-to-market strategy. Known for operational rigor, consultative business development, proactive sourcing, and the ability to align people, process, and technology to deliver measurable hiring outcomes and sustainable business growth in high-growth environments.

Key Accomplishments

  • Built and scaled three high-performing talent acquisition divisions across F&A, IT, and Professional Services, including internal sourcing capabilities.
  • Opened, expanded, or restored performance in 38 profit centers nationwide.
  • Led and developed recruiting teams of 7–10 direct and up to 70 indirect reports across talent acquisition, sales, and operations functions.
  • Delivered double-digit revenue growth and earned multi-year Chairman's Club recognition.

Work History

Managing Director US – Professional Staffing & Government Talent Operations
National Consulting Firm · 2024 – Current

  • Built the Professional Staffing division and later appointed to lead enterprise-wide transformation across government and private-sector accounts.
  • Directed business development, client strategy, and delivery execution across Accounting, Finance, HR, and Operations engagements.
After — The VSG Rewrite
P.R.
Fractional CHRO · VP Talent Acquisition · Business Development

Professional Summary

Business Development & Talent Acquisition leader with 25 years of experience building high-performing recruiting teams, scaling multi-market operations, and driving revenue growth through strategic client partnerships. Available on a fractional or interim basis for VP- through C-suite-level HR, talent acquisition, and BD leadership.

Key Accomplishments

38Profit centers opened, expanded, or restored nationwide
500%Net Starts increase in a market turnaround to full profitability
14Dormant multi-year contracts restored after 35 months of zero growth
500+Recruiting, consulting & sales professionals hired & developed
3Talent acquisition divisions built from scratch
70Indirect reports led across talent, sales & operations

Work History

Managing Director — Professional Staffing & Government Talent Operations
National Finance & Accounting Staffing Firm · 2024 – Present

  • Built the Professional Staffing division; appointed to lead enterprise-wide transformation across government and private-sector accounts.
  • Partnered with CEO, CFO, and CHRO to design workforce strategies, operating models, and transformation roadmaps.
  • Restored performance in 14 dormant accounts, re-establishing client trust and revenue flow.

What Changed — and Why It Works

1

The headline matches the target role. Recruiters and search software look for the job title first — so the resume leads with it.

2

The wins moved up front. The numbers were always there — buried in paragraphs. The rewrite pulls them into a grid a hiring manager sees in the first 7.4 seconds.

3

Keywords recruiters search. The language mirrors how these roles are posted and searched — so the resume gets found, not filtered out.

4

Nothing was invented. Same career, same facts. We make your real experience visible — we never make it up.

Both sides are real — an actual candidate's original resume and the VSG rewrite, shared with permission. Name, contact details, and employers anonymized for confidentiality.

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